Pedropmp's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Lost Gift Trailer]

JESUS

I wanna see this! great trailer you have here ;) Can you PM me the link so that I can watch it the 15 minutes trailer?

[~SnowSnowForLucyTrailer~]

Good, but!

~ Main Comment

Actually I do like the trailer and it looks really promising, but it's a bit confusing, there are some scenes which don't make sense at all, for example, when the text saying "Forced to make evil toys" appears, a short-movie fades-in, after that one, another fades, the second one confuses the viewer, why did you put there a short-movie where the doctor has a gun on his hand? What does it have to do with the toys?

Also be careful with the transitions you changed from "Rescued by a crazy inventor" to "forced to make evil toys" there is something missing in the middle. you made a big jump there.

~Sound

The sound is awesome, I'm using a 108db headphones and the sound rocks, it looks really realistic and the transition sound, it's... crazy.

SpikeVallentine responds:

wow, really happy to hear the sound is complimented.

The gun in his hand? How is that a toy? The gun is a toy.

Thank you for your honesty!

[Madness Inundation]

Really good

The animation is really good, the black guy effects were really cool yet the music was somehow annoying.
Good flash, we are waiting for more :)

[Valhalla Knights 2]

Quite good

It was a really good movie. But the way events came up were a little confusing, you should add more "stuff" between the critical scenes (main scenes). The voices should be improved as they weren't very "attractive".
You have some nice material here but try to work harder on the events succession :)

[Lego World - The Alien]

last one was funnier

Dam I'm sorry to say but this one kinda sucked :(
You must make the movement smoother (somehow), make the movie way bigger and work on that window size.

[SonicSquare... (Preview)]

Dam :S

You have loads to work mate! I'll list it to you.
- Make your own scenarios, don't be lazy and grab JPG images.
- Improve your drawings, you must work harder in the graphics.
- Add an attractive intro menu
- Grab a loader from the "Downloads" section, seriously that one sucks hard.

[Uneasiness of Funkness]

Hmm I liked

I liked it, the movement was really smooth and the movie itself was connected with the music mystery. You have some nice talent, keep the good work.

[TANKMEN .5]

Aahahha

I simply love tank men! Awesome job!!!

[Apollo Injustice]

Ahahahhaha

Awesome! I laugh my ass seeing this ahahah! Good job :)

[Another Day at School]

Ahaahha

I liked it, good job :)
You can make another one but with better graphics and human voices. :)

KungFu-Gerbil responds:

Keep posted dude, thanks for the support, its my first flash and im glad people enjoyed it.