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Bahhh

Work more on the storyline, get someone to do the voices, the drawings are good, get a better music and enjoy the good score :)

read the rules.

You can't beg for a high score! it's the same has saying "do not blam it"!!
You should add some music, re-do the animations and improve your work organization.

adi93ulm responds:

Ok i will do ( second animation though )

hey.....

drawings are good, voices are bad, storyline horrible.
How to improve?
1º Mouth movement after the voice stop, correct that.
2º While talking be more "electric" and make sure you don't breath to the microphone... (always saying this >. >)
3º Get a true storyline
4º Add a nice looking menu to your movies.

Good

In fact I like it, maybe because of the urban style or just because of the awesome transitions combined with the music.
The only thing that keeps me from giving you 2 more points is that frame rate.

Why?

You simply made a sponge bomb picture flashing. Why you did that?
As the rules say I should, in my review, tell you how to improve your movie, so.... make a true flash movie, grab some awesome music combine it with awesome drawings and be happy with your high score.

Hmm maybe

I'll give you a five in 0 to 10 and a 3 in 0 to 5.
I'm giving you this chance because I?m gonna trust you. You don't seem to be bad drawing in flash so I think you can make something out of this.
Good luck in the future while making the series or movie :)

chillwhale responds:

i hope you guys like the rebirth of this film it is much MUCH longer

Good :)

Well I really enjoyed this small trailer! Good graphics and the music wasn't bad. So good movie you got here :)

Liked it

I like the movie but there is something strange... Did the men killed the death?!?!?... Or it was a monk or something like that?...

Don-Wang responds:

The men killed the guy who killed giovanni

AWESOME!!!

Make more this flash was amazing!!!This should be at the first place!!!!!SO perfect!!!make more and more!!!

Sorry

The Sound was reallly realllllyyyyyyyy bad!!!! Its look like that thing was recorded in Stone Age!!!The animation is +/- try to put voices and dialog. But you need to start working more in your flash <-sound-> Skills. Abd the animation i liked it but the sound destroyed all the movie beacause only with out sound we can see your movie.

Nothing to say about me :)

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